Guys, tried to make it musical this time. Anyone who can crack the right notes and strike the right chords for this ????... Ishan !!!! :-)
In love without a love, again,
Did lose but ready to lose, again,
In this desert waiting for the rain, again,
Already fed up of this chain, again,
Can you take up the same pain, again ?
But I still wait for the rain, again,
Have I gone Insane, again ?
Can't find the right lane, again.
Do I really need a cane, again ?
By:-
Dr.Pritesh
8 comments:
U need a sedative ...thts it.
naah dont get confused !!!!! sedative won't help coz then i won't be able to do justice to my love which is also my first love thats studying :-) !!
hey bhaia you are great poet too!
but sorry to say i cant understand why always "again please send me the reason in gmail
"battles have been won,battles have been lost, Another battle awaits to be won at any cost "
the time has come again... pg xms due nest year... need ur support and wishes as usual... teri padhai kaisi chal rahi hain ??
woha.....rhyming- yeah, meaningful-yeah,wanna hear wht i hav 2 say...keep writing AGAIN-yeah
:)
@Pritesh:
Loved this one! Very subtly intense!:)
@ sagar : dude... everyone has his story... sometimes the time,people and place differ while the story remains the same... i can figure that out now ...lolz :-)
@swadha : thanks... well, u caught my feelings on the dot dear...
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